Have you seen me?

How will you?

You’re busy.

But, I’m e’where. And you know that very well.


Okay, are you married?

If yes, then slap your wife hard–

The one that’ll imprint your fingers on her cheek.

Then, I’ll there. Yes, I’ll be there.

What, if, no?

Then just love a girl, have some good sex with her…

If you have courage, impregnate her and then just dump her.

And take another girl under your stride.

Then, I’ll there. Yes, I’ll be there.

You’re not satiated by this?

Okay…consider another situation…

Drink a lot, scream at your parents, at your neighbors…

Curse them, rinse them with the dirty words…

You’ll find me there…yes, you’ll find me there…

Oh…you want more…last it is…because I had a calling–

As a boy had died for a girl.

Oh…you’ve sat up with your ears pointing to hear and then…

The beckoning becoming strong…so to cut the long story short

The boy was poor, the girl is rich; they fall in love and decide to get married.

But, society uses me to plant the poison ivy–

Pointing out, rather highlighting, boy is poor how’ll he keep happy–

The girl–born and brought up in abundance…so to keep honor–

The boy had to die…I should go…because I needed to be there–

As people will use me against each other…speaking verse…

Questioning other and themselves…

I should go now…

If you don’t like this poem,

Then give a call to me…I’ll pass the message as you’ll dictate it…

From Poet’s Desk:

Used the idea of “criticize” not the word. Please, don’t only Like this poem, but, let me know your review.

Daily Prompt: Criticize 


13 Comments Add yours

  1. Hooked…superb writing

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  2. Exceptionally well written!

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  3. mihirtrada says:

    Extremely deep poem and well written sangbad .. Had to read it again and again to finally get over the thoughts it created at the first time ! 👌👌

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    1. Sangbad says:

      This is what the Criticize is actually, right? Thinking and saying and then thinking on the saying and saying…

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      1. mihirtrada says:

        Indeed .. you’ve made a whole poem on Criticize.. it’s actually a terrific talent bro !! … 😃

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        1. Sangbad says:

          a big smiled smiley bud…

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        2. Sangbad says:

          You also write s’thing on the prompt

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          1. mihirtrada says:

            I can try. Not sure if it will be this good though !!


            1. Sangbad says:

              Try it…because I’ve also tried..rather every writings of mine are and were my try to write good and to keep me unsatisfied–striving for better…

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            2. mihirtrada says:

              Yes bro..I’ll surely try once 😃

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        3. Sangbad says:

          By the way, look out for my next poem…it’ll be out in two hours or so…review that also…

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