The Valentine Breakfast

I turned my wheelchair, the minute countdown of the microwave neared to end; there should be no beep, otherwise, she’ll get awake and then, finding me here, she’ll drive me out of here. I hadn’t taken the sleeping pill last night–an outrageous action it was; she’ll scream at me I know very well; but, I also know when I’ll put up that child-like smile–you just know how to stop me she’ll say ‘fore embracing me to her bosom. Honey, let’s go to sleep now; I’ll adore your creation at breakfast–she was standing there, but, for how long?

From Author’s Desk:

It’s week 54 of the Three Line Tales & week 3 for me. After Daily Prompt, this challenge by Sonya let me delve into deep of my thoughts and bring out s’thing different and that too only in story. This one I had tried s’thing light & romantic for Three Line Tales #54.

Please don’t hit Like only, Comment also so that I can develop as a better author. 

Also linking this for Loveuary Day#9 by Ritu Bhathal

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22 Comments Add yours

  1. James McEwan says:

    I note your words asking for feedback to improve your writing -something I try my best at. You have a deep story here and as others have said they enjoyed reading. But, there is always a but, you can make this so much better if you can get it into three short lines. Keep the one idea in mind and cut out the unnecessary words. Have fun.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks for the tip…will keep this in mind from next time…

      Liked by 1 person

    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks for appreciation and for stopping by…

      Like

      1. Afraid of her scolding and screaming, I realiseD the love behind them, when she is no more. A tale too deep for tears.

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        1. Sangbad says:

          Thanks for the review and for stopping by…

          Like

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