The Valentine Breakfast

22 thoughts on “The Valentine Breakfast”

  1. I note your words asking for feedback to improve your writing -something I try my best at. You have a deep story here and as others have said they enjoyed reading. But, there is always a but, you can make this so much better if you can get it into three short lines. Keep the one idea in mind and cut out the unnecessary words. Have fun.

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