Out of The Blue

Tender was your love

Tender is this solitary…

Beautiful was your kisses

Beautiful is this forgetting you…

I’m not writing this poem-

Out of the ache you’ve left-

But out of the depth of the sleep-

That I’ve after struggling-

With self, who dictate and wanted-

Not to forget you and let you go…

Somber were your touches,

Somber is the sleep…

Tender was your love,

Tender is this tiredness…

Reposting this for Loveuary Day 17.1 by Ritu Bhathal (But I Smile Anyway…)

16 responses to “    Out of The Blue”

    1. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem…

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    1. Not to mention…so how is it…by the way can I submit one more…a repost rather

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      1. You can submit as many as you wish 😊

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        1. okay…later this eve going to submit another one..

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  1. […] I was overjoyed at the moment and decided to stay back for few more days. I renamed the poem as Out of Blue. Next step I had taken was to reopen my Facebook account and connect the blog there. I informed […]

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  2. Beautifully written 😊

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    1. Thank you…I also liked some of yours post…

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      1. I’m glad you do. 🙂

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