Ivan Ivanovich (Tanka)

 

in sickly light through ajar 

door saw once a dear friend of

Ivan Nikiforvich

Ivan Ivanovich in choir

gaunt form face wrinkled hairs white

[Based on the How Ivan Ivanovich  Quarreled With Ivan Nikiforvich by Nikolay (Nikolai) Gogol]

For Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #22 Door & Friend

Posted to Haiku Horizons #162 Door

12 responses to “Ivan Ivanovich (Tanka)”

  1. Wonderful both the quote and poem!👍

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  2. Hello and welcome. What a fun, Tanka poem. Well done! ❤

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    1. Thank you for giving such challenging words prompts…

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      1. I’m glad you are stretching your poetry wings. 😀

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        1. You follow my posts?? Thanks for the appreciation…

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          1. Of course. You follow me don’t you? 😀

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            1. Yes…its my daily blog regime to give 60 mins divided into 2 session of 30 mins each to read & check what others are writing…

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            2. Well done. ❤

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