Song of Sacrificed Souls: The Last Note (Somonka)

 

 

He

Nothing to say…or…

many things to say…tangled in

bitter emotions…

only I want is your return…

nothing else…come back…love you

 

She

I have gone far from

you…leave me…it is not you..

but me, I, who is

leaving you…love you, but, we

shall let it go, the time demands

From Poet’s Desk:

Thanks to Mick E Talbot who let me know this format of combining two Tanka that are exchanged ‘ween lovers. I had taken liberty to make it a sad one.

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9 Comments Add yours

  1. Stirred my soul, a little!

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    1. Sangbad says:

      It’s my pleasure my Thoughts stirred you…

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      1. Would love to continue reading! Please stop by my blog space so that we could continue this awe-inspiting exchange of ideas 🙂

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        1. Sangbad says:

          yes…but please pass me the link to your blog ’cause it’s not getting open at my end

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          1. Hope we are sorted 🙂

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  2. Loved it! Touched my heart! 👍

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  3. -Eugenia says:

    Concise and emotional. Well done.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks for the appreciation…

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