The (Un)Deliver Message


She looked at her sleeping husband. He doesn’t look peaceful like him at all. She brushed her belly gently and said softly am going to be a mother…can you listen to me…A forgotten face with hazelnut colored eyes flashed in her mind. This was the only dream they, rather, he adores most.

Dedicated to Her

Originally written for Sacha Black’s Writespiration#104 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 8 prompt Choke

Now also including Daily Prompt (02/24/2017): Baby


7 Comments Add yours

  1. There’s something mysterious going on here. Can you explain who has the hazel eyes? Is it the baby’s father, and not the man sleeping next to her?


    1. Sangbad says:

      a smiley…the father of the baby was her husband…she reminds s’one from her past life with whom she intend to share the dream…

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      1. Ah. Thanks for the clarification. I was reading too deeply into her dreams 🙂

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        1. Sangbad says:

          It’s okay…new episode of Once had been posted this morn…


          1. Will read and comment.

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      2. Sacha Black says:

        Ah okay, I was a little confused there too. Fantastic entry once again 🙂

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Sangbad says:

          Thank you for the review….


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