The Melting Snow: Smile of the Cabin Owner (Traveler’s Tanka)





the eve is coming

down not quicken he smile as

sun burn down for moon

melting snow is aid to re–

veal untold hush of summer


March, 20–

To read more of Traveler poems visit Traveler.




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Image Courtesy: Olivier Guillard



11 Comments Add yours

    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…


  1. Cool one this is 👍

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  2. bikurgurl says:

    I’m so glad you joined us this week — and what a lovely haiku! Particularly loving the last line, “untold hush of summer”…lovely ❤

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…by the way it’s Tanka….

      Liked by 1 person

      1. bikurgurl says:

        Ah! My apologies!!! I am still learning the intricacies of poetry 🙂 Thank you so much for joining us!

        Liked by 1 person

  3. Hello and welcome. A lovely Tanka poem, I must say. We’re all longing for spring. ❤

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Yes we all….

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