Two (Haiku): Gamble & Truth

 

–a–

take a bit of sin

and parlay the good deeds now

let play the gamble

–b–

love lust trust word echo*

what will be your parlay to

make our love a truth

*echo as synonym of memory

Daily Prompt: Parlay

16 responses to “Two (Haiku): Gamble & Truth”

  1. Lovely… enjoyed reading .. haiku..seems impossible for me.

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    1. you just need to try…nothing else…

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        1. will wait for one from you…

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    1. โ˜บ thank you…

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  2. Awesome! Such a prompt attempt and that too so beautifully!

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    1. โ˜บ thanks Di…the meaning bring out the thoughts otherwise I decided after seeing the prompt not today…

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      1. Kudos to you ๐Ÿ‘

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        1. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„waiting for yours

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          1. I’m planning to take a break from daily prompt attempts from today…

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            1. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฏthen original one now?

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            2. Yea will enjoy reading other bloggers work for sometime and planning to attempt other forms of poetry. Will keep on posting in between…

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            3. Okay will miss you…and yes waiting for your reviews on other posts of mine…

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            4. I will read rest in few hours today

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