When Nature Muse #3 (Shadorma)

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eve sky was

gloomy from having

the clouds all

over its whole

day wind had a talk with the

clouds to make her smile

20131117_152144 Picture Courtesy–The Poet

wind started 

blowing mild first

then soft clouds

moved slowly

a portrait of last ray got

drawn on spring eve sky

Written in Shadorma format. Another first attempt. Please let me know your reviews. 

Daily Prompt: Nuance

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6 Comments Add yours

  1. Wow! I never knew about this format will search more about it!

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    1. Sangbad says:

      3/5/3/3/7/5…6 lines…any number of stanzas

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      1. Thank You for introducing me to this new form!

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        1. Sangbad says:

          Not to mention…by the way take your time I had extended my wings a little bit into writings…there’s another post that will shock you or might get you angry at me

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