Fall (Haiku)

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submontane river

twist silently shout

high during falling

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# High is used as synonym for excitement

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The featured image is of River Beas, Kulu, Himachal Pradesh.

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RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #140: Twist & Shout

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8 Comments Add yours

  1. trashofpi says:

    silently x shout
    high x falling
    Two oxymoron in two lines, great.
    3 out of 3 would have been perfect.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…the syllable count stopped me ☺will try next time

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  2. Sheetal Bhardwaj says:

    The picture is so scenic and refreshing

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…

      Like

  3. ZurkPoetry says:

    I like the double meaning of ‘high’, adds a layer of depth to your poem, really nice! 😊

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…I had used to meet the syllable count…you show me its also carrying a double meaning…thanks for that & again for the review…

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