Pray (Haiku)

 

plunge enchantress on

me and allow me to taste 

aphrodisiac 

Title inspired from the song “Pray” from Fifty Shades Darker OST

Daily Prompt: Immerse (Plunge)

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9 Comments

  1. A very good senryu, but it would be worth checking to see if, “aphrodisiac”, is a kigo, it could be related to the season spring. If the latter is the case then it is an excellent haiku.

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