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Pray (Haiku)

 

plunge enchantress on

me and allow me to tasteĀ 

aphrodisiacĀ 

Title inspired from the song “Pray” from Fifty Shades Darker OST

Daily Prompt: Immerse (Plunge)

Sangbad

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  2. micketalbot Avatar
    micketalbot

    A very good senryu, but it would be worth checking to see if, “aphrodisiac”, is a kigo, it could be related to the season spring. If the latter is the case then it is an excellent haiku.

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      Sangbad

      What is this Kigo Mick?

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        micketalbot

        Have answered in an earlier reply šŸ™‚

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        1. Sangbad Avatar
          Sangbad

          I’ve replied back…thanks for clearing the doubt…

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            šŸ™‚

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  3. Prakash Hegade Avatar
    Prakash Hegade

    He he.. The jumps of aphrodisiac! Good one.

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      Sangbad

      a shied smiley…

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    faryal’s fusion.

    Please follow me šŸ˜Š

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