When Nature Muse #2 (Tanka)

eve city aria at high the

the spring wind give a push clouds

move the moon peeped out

sky anxious anyone saw

anyone adore the moment

03/08/2017

 

Daily Prompt: Nervous (Anxious)

Re-posting for Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #25 Clouds & Spring

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  1. What an imaginary! Wow!!

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks Di…😊

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  2. trashofpi says:

    Did you play with the structuring of the sentences?

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Yes…sometimes to keep the set structure stable…

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  3. Sangbad, I love the last two lines: “sky anxious anyone saw, anyone adore the moment.” A lovely image in my mind of the night sky. ❤

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you Colleen…it’s my pleasure you like it so much…I will write another ome…

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