–a–
horizon darken
sea turmoil cloud roar breeze rush
lighthouse wake path drawn
–b–
morn calm breeze let feel
void silence old days long dead
gust in heart skip beat
RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #141: Breeze & Blow (Gust, Rush)
Picture: Eddystone Lighthouse During A Storm by William Daniell (1769-1837)
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The imagery behind your emotions is so powerful!
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Thank you Prajakta…in Haiku I had tried for the 1st time this type of format…
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your words were really descriptive, emotional and turbulent like the storm. very masculine indeed!
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Masculine…that’s a strong word…yes I had tried this before in other forms but in Haiku its the 1st time…
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well done!
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