Thoughts of Words

Hold Your Step Dear Traveler…–Michael Madhusudan Dutta

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Two (Haiku/Senryu): Calm & Storm

 

–a–

horizon darken

sea turmoil cloud roar breeze rush

lighthouse wake path drawn

–b–

morn calm breeze let feel

void silence old days long dead

gust in heart skip beat

RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #141: Breeze & Blow (Gust, Rush)

Picture: Eddystone Lighthouse During A Storm by William Daniell (1769-1837)

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5 responses to “Two (Haiku/Senryu): Calm & Storm”

  1. Prajakta Avatar
    Prajakta

    The imagery behind your emotions is so powerful!

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    1. Sangbad Avatar
      Sangbad

      Thank you Prajakta…in Haiku I had tried for the 1st time this type of format…

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  2. Singledust Avatar
    Singledust

    your words were really descriptive, emotional and turbulent like the storm. very masculine indeed!

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    1. Sangbad Avatar
      Sangbad

      Masculine…that’s a strong word…yes I had tried this before in other forms but in Haiku its the 1st time…

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      1. Singledust Avatar
        Singledust

        well done!

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