Storm (Magnetic Poem)

magnetic poem 2

My first attempt at the Magnetic Poem. Apologize for the image it is not clear. Please let me know what you think of this attempt.

storm blow in garden 

as death play life fiddle

black whisper shadow sing

15 responses to “Storm (Magnetic Poem)”

  1. One more new form that too magnetic! Good job!

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  2. It is lovely Sangbad. A wonderful first attempt! ❤


  3. May happiness storm in like sardines,
    and sorrows may be a short as a needle,
    will our dreams ever get wings! 🙂

    Liked by 2 people

      1. Na na..
        your lines were sublime! 🙂


        1. You’re so kind…thank you for the appreciation

          Liked by 1 person

          1. You are welcome, but I really liked the verse there by you! 🙂


            1. Thanks again…its my pleasure you like them

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  4. I like it. Full of images.


    1. Thanks Jane for the help and this review…


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