Storm (Magnetic Poem)

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My first attempt at the Magnetic Poem. Apologize for the image it is not clear. Please let me know what you think of this attempt.

storm blow in garden 

as death play life fiddle

black whisper shadow sing

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15 Comments Add yours

  1. One more new form that too magnetic! Good job!

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  2. Kat Myrman says:

    It is lovely Sangbad. A wonderful first attempt! ❤

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  3. May happiness storm in like sardines,
    and sorrows may be a short as a needle,
    will our dreams ever get wings! 🙂

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Wow…beautiful…

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      1. Na na..
        your lines were sublime! 🙂

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        1. Sangbad says:

          You’re so kind…thank you for the appreciation

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          1. You are welcome, but I really liked the verse there by you! 🙂

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            1. Sangbad says:

              Thanks again…its my pleasure you like them

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  4. I like it. Full of images.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks Jane for the help and this review…

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