Shadow (Tanka)


fog around waxed edge

disrupted by spring breeze dark

getting new fresh shade

light of every moment renew

as new bit lights up surround

Inspired by Candle Light by Sushmita Mukherjee (Uniquesus)

RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #142: Spring & Fresh

Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #27: Light & Dark

Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge #38: Lights & Fog


18 Comments Add yours

  1. Kaz says:

    very interesting poem

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks for coming by…and reading and reviewing my poem…


    1. Sangbad says:

      If you don’t mind, my name spelling you had typed it wrong…it’ll be Sangbad…


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