Triplet (Haiku/Senryu): Trail, Message & Despair

 

–a–

sun sinking slowly

horizon gold gull flew fast

before losing trail

–b–

sky on sea orange

water also mermaid peeped

gull passed the message

[Based on The Little Mermaid by Hans Christian Andersen (1837)]

–c–

Crusoe suspire soft

Friday look at him another

day ends in despair

[Based on Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe (1719)]

Thursday Photo Prompt (03/30/2017) by Sue Vincent

gold

18 Comments Add yours

  1. robertcday says:

    Nice! 🙂 What’s a ‘suspire’?
    Kindness – Robert.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Suspire at one time literary term for breathe as well as rare word for sigh…here it was used for sigh…

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      1. robertcday says:

        Well there you go – you learn something new every day! 🙂
        Thanks kindly for replying.
        Kindness – Robert.

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        1. Sangbad says:

          Not to mention…helping others means learning something new and fresh…

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          1. robertcday says:

            True that. We need to get our and about to do that. Where are you going today? 🙂

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            1. Sangbad says:

              Right now at office…stealing time and writing…following you…will check your blog son…in return you can too…

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            2. robertcday says:

              Well check that dude out!
              Following me from his office!
              Bold, brave and daring.
              Sticking it to the man!
              🙂 Laters, my friend.

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