Two (Haiku/Senryu): Desire & Cooed

[Trying silly, light-heart Haiku. Please comment on this pair.]

–a–

issue me passport

dear darling I want my lips

on yours slime pink one

–b–

pigeon take nibble

of bread crow caws harshly it

cooed more fly in soon

Daily Prompt: Passport

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6 Comments Add yours

  1. I keep seeing you use the word senryu, what does it mean?
    I like your haiku, just wrote my first ones on my blog if you’d be interested to read 🙂

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Senryu actually Haiku but it deals with human psychology mainly like this pair…there’s a debate on this classification so to avoid the debate it’s suitable and best, as most of us preferred, to title it as Haiku/Senryu…

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  2. bhaatdal says:

    Wonderrrrrfulll .. I am a Haiku Fan and this ones a real treat to my eyes 🙂

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you…there are more at Haiku in Verselet section…

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  3. alabasterbeachgirl says:

    I love this. Your choice of words create great visuals.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Than you…

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