~1~

gust spread roti bits cause

chagrin cooed or caws in joy

basking its victory

~2~

sometimes cause of laugh

in lorn hours sometimes cry in

meanwhile sometimes joy

in a lost moment sometimes

chagrin your memories darling

RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #143: Chagrin & Joy

Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #28: Laugh & Cry

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6 thoughts on “Two (Haiku & Tanka): Victory & Darling

    1. Yes I also think so…it’s fine Colleen…from this week I’ll left a link in your comment box also like I did for other prompt I attempt…by the way thank you for the comment…

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