Two (Haiku & Tanka): Victory & Darling

 

~1~

gust spread roti bits cause

chagrin cooed or caws in joy

basking its victory

~2~

sometimes cause of laugh

in lorn hours sometimes cry in

meanwhile sometimes joy

in a lost moment sometimes

chagrin your memories darling

RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge #143: Chagrin & Joy

Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #28: Laugh & Cry

6 Comments Add yours

  1. Beautiful. I don’t think your pingback worked, is why I missed you. Sorry my friend. ❤

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Yes I also think so…it’s fine Colleen…from this week I’ll left a link in your comment box also like I did for other prompt I attempt…by the way thank you for the comment…

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  2. Both poems are very nice. Well done combining the challenges. 🙂

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  3. Two challenges in one post that too awesome 👌👌

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Sometimes I do this when I am pretty occupied…last week had incorporated three challenges in one…

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