Two(Haiku/Senryu): Now & Seek

~~1~~

denial of all

we shared is needed now to

accept the present

—-xxx—-

~~2~~

went forward to turn

back liked her eyes her voice but

I seeked you again

—xxx—

to Her

Daily Prompt: Denial

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8 Comments Add yours

  1. kittysverses says:

    *makes sense. Sorry typo. And yours is well written.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      a smiley….

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  2. kittysverses says:

    After reading your article on Haiku, this form of poetry makes senses. Thank you for the enlightenment.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      It’s my pleasure I have been able to help you understand…the following part will be posted soon…

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      1. kittysverses says:

        Btw, I’ve modified my yesterday’s Haiku. Please read it at your leisure and offer comments/suggestions. Thank you.

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        1. Sangbad says:

          okay will look at it…

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