Poor Old Joe (Micro/Flash Fiction)



Joe look around. The smell is there but dull and weak; he curse his old age for this. He need to search it out to keep his job. He scratch the light graveled earth and after few moments, a clasp protrude out of the earth. He sit down, panting, and woof loudly.

(52 words)

Thursday Photo Prompt (04/06/2017) by Sue Vincent

12 Comments Add yours

  1. Michael says:

    A dog on the hunt Sangbad? It is intriguing….just a suggestion re: your verbs should be in past tense, eg looked, cursed, needed…..etc


    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you Michael…I had wrote this in Historical Present tense…

      Liked by 1 person

  2. Sue Vincent says:

    I agree, intriguing 🙂


    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks Sue…

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Sreeblogs says:

    Good one…your posts always make me ponder…bhabchi amio try kori ekta lekhar 😀


    1. Sangbad says:

      lekho…lekho…apekhae roilam…

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  4. Indira says:

    An element of intrigue…!


    1. Sangbad says:

      Yes…thank you for the review…


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