I See… (Micro/Flash Fiction)

 

A warning board…

Then…

I see you…fishing…it’s near to noon…

Then…

Then…what, you see…

I see…I see…revolver…with silencer…pointed at your crown…your blood…on…the…steel railing…

This is insane…honey, let’s go…it’ll be late–

To kill YOU…

What’re you saying…he’s my husband…he loves me…

Really…so…why, I see…the shadow…another…lady…pretty…young…look like, Dear, you…

What she saying, Raj…

Nothing…just some Gypsy gibberish…to extort money…

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What has happened…

A lady’s body had washed up…early this morning…you laughing…

I had said them…

–xx–

[Written in Story-Through-Dialogues Pattern]

100 Word Wednesday Week #13Β by Bikurgurl

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9 responses to “I See… (Micro/Flash Fiction)”

  1. Interesting cadence in your submission…the way the words gently lay down the devious deed. Thank you for joining us again this week πŸ™‚

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    1. Thank you for the comment….tried something different again…

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      1. I love that you’re using different styles and rhythms! Pushing yourself outside your normal is great for growth πŸ™‚ Well done!

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          1. My pleasure πŸ™‚

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