A warning board…
Then…
I see you…fishing…it’s near to noon…
Then…
…
Then…what, you see…
I see…I see…revolver…with silencer…pointed at your crown…your blood…on…the…steel railing…
This is insane…honey, let’s go…it’ll be late–
To kill YOU…
What’re you saying…he’s my husband…he loves me…
Really…so…why, I see…the shadow…another…lady…pretty…young…look like, Dear, you…
What she saying, Raj…
Nothing…just some Gypsy gibberish…to extort money…
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What has happened…
A lady’s body had washed up…early this morning…you laughing…
I had said them…
–xx–
[Written in Story-Through-Dialogues Pattern]
100 Word Wednesday Week #13 by Bikurgurl
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Interesting cadence in your submission…the way the words gently lay down the devious deed. Thank you for joining us again this week 🙂
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Thank you for the comment….tried something different again…
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I love that you’re using different styles and rhythms! Pushing yourself outside your normal is great for growth 🙂 Well done!
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Thanks Ma’am…
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My pleasure 🙂
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Awesome. 🙂
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😊
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Loved it.
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