The Echo of the Vale (Haibun)

The moon for long is curtain by the clouds. Its glow can be though feel as an outline for the clouds. The travellers speed up their movements. They has heard of some unnatural phenomenon going for a last couple of months. Did you hear that…one ask another in shaken whisper voice. Another nod his head in negative.

she look at them from

distance she like one tonight

but moon will be full 

The moon suddenly come out of the clouds. The field becomes white; the trees there cast a long shadow. She looks behind hearing a noise. The hunter has been on her for last few days. She needs to be careful more than she was last full moon. She felt a usurp inside her. She knows it has begun. She ran to the deep in the forest.

vale echo her howl two

travellers forget path

hunter fail to aim 

~~xx~~

Tried a Haibun for the first time. Let me know your comment and reviews. 


Daily Prompt: Unravel

A-Z Challenge Letter J

Tried an Haibun. A new Journey I taken on.

21 responses to “The Echo of the Vale (Haibun)”

  1. Haibuns are a lot of fun because they make you write in first person so you are always there in the action, so to speak. When I write them I use this rule to help me cover the requirements: “each haibun should include travel, seasonal and nature”
    You have done well if this is your first try at the haibun Sangbad…

    Like

    1. Actually had tried one before but that was inspired one of a Neruda poem…this was my first original Haibun…thanks Michael for reading & the review…

      Liked by 1 person

  2. I’m reading a Haibun for the first time and this one made me a fan of it

    Like

    1. Pleasure is mine then…

      Liked by 1 person

  3. Brilliant words composed with an apt picture Sangbad

    Like

  4. Beautiful haibun, and perfect haiku…

    Like

    1. Thanks Mick…am in relief now…

      Liked by 1 person

          1. I don’t know if you have reasons for not using 🙂 its just that I don’t think I am worthy of your ‘a smiley’, all that typing, when : ) with no spaces will give you 🙂 , just wondering ; ) with no spaces will give 😉 🙂

            Like

            1. actually from PC I am still weak with these smileys but from cell phone not…that’s why I type…

              Liked by 1 person

              1. really not a problem and now you know tow the Word Press editor will accept whether you can use them else I don’t know..

                Like

                1. okay…thanks for understanding…

                  Liked by 1 person

  5. Very nice post ☺

    Like

    1. Thank you for coming by and reading and commenting on my writing

      Liked by 1 person

      1. You are welcome ☺

        Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: