Hunter & Haunted



Blazed by balustrade of bed,

She smile subtly; shining was

Her eyes–ebony exotic enigmatic.


Tied tightly. Bite lightly. Skim deeply.

She is toy nothing more than that.

Night not old; night not young.


Want more. More she wants.

Inside her, insist she; escape I want.

Hunter chained, haunted unchained.


National Poetry Writing Month Day#12: A Poem Incorporating Alliteration & Assonance

17 responses to “Hunter & Haunted”

  1. What an amazing piece of poetry ! I loved the style.


    1. Thanks…it was till now the most challenging prompt I had tried in NaPoWriMo 2017…all those repetation and taking care of the rhyme through that…I enjoyed a lot writing this poem…

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      1. I am sure it must have been quite challenging. But you did a great job Sangbad ! 🙂


        1. Thank you, Chhaya…

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          1. My pleasure Sangbad 🙂

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  2. Hmmm great Hunter is always changed and haunted. Awesome words


        1. Hmm…never still felt this…☺

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  3. Bah! where do you get these amazing ideas from? khub bhalo laglo


    1. janina…just thoughts gulo bhese jete di…I let my thoughts to wander on the page…kalkr NaPoWriMo postta pore dkho…otao bhalo lagbe mone hoy…


      1. couldn’t find it..konta?


    1. Thanks Dear…waiting for your entry…


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