2 (Tanka): Mean & Have


vanity power

expansion war lost its self

becoming a mean

to shout for weak peace is

reflection see and react


[Don’t know whether something like Angsty Tanka exists. So, trying one. Let me know your thoughts.]

peace was what I had

when you were here beside me

war is what I have

empty pack of cigarettes

yellow memories soul tore



Colleen’s Weekly Tanka Challenge #31: Peace & Tear (Tore)

Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge #42: War & Peace

18 Comments Add yours

  1. willowdot21 says:

    I like both, the second really captures a broken heart.


    1. sangbad says:

      Thank you for stop by…keep visiting…


      1. willowdot21 says:

        My pleasure 💖

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Singledust says:

    i liked the words yellow memories like old pages from a book, that time kept hidden

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Sangbad says:

      My pleasure Gina

      Liked by 1 person

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