Sabishii [Troiku]

The sleigh [Tan Taigi (Translation by Keisen)]

Looking back;
Now each other
Being in the snow

Horse 1

looking back

the old days are broken frames

infested treasure

Horse 2

now each other

walked away silence is path end

mist wish encounter 

Horse 3

being in the snow

love is saved a secret cave

ice flakes covered path 

Sabishii means lonely, lonesome, desolate, solitary

Troiku is a Haiku form created back in 2012 by Chèvrefeuille. To know more click.

Featured image is of Tan Taigi procure from Blogspot.

Heeding Haiku with Chèvrefeuille (04/26/2017)

14 responses to “Sabishii [Troiku]”

  1. Sangbad what a beautiful Troiku you have shared here. I loved reading it.


    1. Thank you Sir…it is my pleasure you love it…I am a Haiku enthusiastic…if you can please check my Haiku section in my blog…I think you will love few more of my Haiku…

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      1. I will for sure check your haiku section. How long do you write haiku?


        1. It will be my pleasure…I am writing Haiku for last 5-6 months…

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  2. I should really ware my glasses all the time, yours are perfect, all mine are just that, mine, not as Chèvrefeuille suggested. I will however have another look at all of mine and see if I can make them right. I am truly grateful Sangbad, and just a tad embarrassed ☺


    1. Oh Mick you are a funny old man…do not be embarrassed…err make human…and you have written inspired troiku…so don’t feel bad…

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      1. Thank you for your kind words Sangbad, appreciated!


        1. Not to mention Mick…you inspired me again…I will try your way of Troika sooner…


          1. When you say my way, if you are referring to my first attempt, I am not sure that under the rules they qualify as troiku, as the sledge, (troika) was not carried through to the horses. The ‘Crows Charge’ troiku I have corrected to follow Chèvrefeuille guidelines, albeit using my own haiku as the sledge, as in using the lines to start each horse. Anyway I have to go and review your horror haiku, muh ahhh!


            1. You have unknowingly created a new form…and that what I was talking of…

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              1. I did think that too, and I am honoured that you thought of them in that way too. Cant wait to see what you come up with….

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                1. You have to wait for that…check my post titled Break…

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                  1. Taking one too 🙂


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