Godhuli (Tanka)

west sun ray smudge on

horizon bird flying to

nest none is steady

traffic busy cacophony

high another day ending

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Godhuli is the Bengali term for twilight

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15 responses to “Godhuli (Tanka)”

  1. Oshadharon…pic ta ki nijer tola?

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      1. 👌🏻

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        1. Instateo post korechlm picta…

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          1. Okay

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    2travellingsisters

    Beautiful words!!

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and reading and commenting on my poem

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  3. You painted a beautiful picture with your words!

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    1. Thanks, Di…By the way the featured picture was clicked by me…

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      1. One more skill! Great bro 👍

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  4. Nice one, godhuli has the same meaning in Kannada too.

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    1. Really…that’s a big surprise…thanks for sharing…

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