Thoughts of Words

Hold Your Step Dear Traveler…–Michael Madhusudan Dutta

Flight of Eaglet (Haiku)


she forward few steps

spread her wings wind is swift a

push down precipice

—xx—


https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/precipice/

Sangbad

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14 responses to “Flight of Eaglet (Haiku)”

  1. micketalbot Avatar
    micketalbot

    I like it, but you don’t need the ‘a’ on the second line.

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    1. sangbad Avatar
      sangbad

      Okay…if I want to emphasize then what is the approach because I am in bit of doubt on using the ‘a’…

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      1. micketalbot Avatar
        micketalbot

        Sangbad,
        Can we discuss this via email, please. My email address is larvae003 at yahoo dot co dot uk . With respect: dot=. and at=@, no spaces.

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        1. sangbad Avatar
          sangbad

          Yeah sure…my email id is sangbadmitra@outlook.com

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          1. micketalbot Avatar
            micketalbot

            Thank you, be with you soon…

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            1. sangbad Avatar
              sangbad

              👍

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              micketalbot

              Soon

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  2. Meenakshi Sethi Avatar
    Meenakshi Sethi

    Awesome 👌

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    1. sangbad Avatar
      sangbad

      ☺

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  3. nildamacedopaulino Avatar
    nildamacedopaulino

    Nice ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. sangbad Avatar
      sangbad

      Thank you ☺

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      1. nildamacedopaulino Avatar
        nildamacedopaulino

        Comment my photo!!! Kisses ❤ ❤ ❤

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  4. ❦Just Me❦ Avatar
    ❦Just Me❦

    lovely! ❤︎

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    1. sangbad Avatar
      sangbad

      😊 thanks

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