Grandfather Clock (Haiku/Senryu)

dark corner cob web

mechanical pang create

chime majestical


7 responses to “Grandfather Clock (Haiku/Senryu)”

  1. Nice one, Sangbad. I like the way you rearrange the word order.


    1. Thanks Jane…playing with the form…☺


        1. An interview of mine had been posted…please check it…and let me know your thoughts…


  2. Interesting haiku. Loving the way that you managed to grasp our hearts with this amount of words, simplistic, modernised and encapsulating a sea of thoughts. Hope to see more from you. Have hope, write on!


    1. Thank you for stopping by & reading and reviewing my writing…and also for the encouraging comment…keep visiting my blog…

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