Barish main bheegi hawa chu gaya is shaam
Acha hi laga is thaka hua ankhonko, manko
Yaad aya kuch bhige hue yaaden achanak
Rokna chaha par pal kisike sunta nahi…
—xx–
The rain drenched breeze passes me this evening
It feels good to the tired eye, soul
Few drenched memories crowd me suddenly
I want to stop them but bits never obey…
–xx–
Tried a Hindi poem first time here. Please comment and let me know your reviews.
38 responses to “Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments”
Very good poem.
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Thank you for stopping by…Keep visiting…
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Good going my friend. Keep writing and you’ll be pro in hindi poetry in no time. Well done!
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May be…I’m learning Hindi & writing poem in it right now…
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That’s great! All the best.
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Thanks…
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Good first attempt bro! I’m sure you can win hearts in hindi too! Do not stop here keep writing ! ☺
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☺ will try to not to stop…
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