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Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments

Posted by Sangbad on

Barish main bheegi hawa chu gaya is shaam

Acha hi laga is thaka hua ankhonko, manko

Yaad aya kuch bhige hue yaaden achanak

Rokna chaha par pal kisike sunta nahi…

—xx–

The rain drenched breeze passes me this evening

It feels good to the tired eye, soul

Few drenched memories crowd me suddenly

I want to stop them but bits never obey…

–xx–

Tried a Hindi poem first time here. Please comment and let me know your reviews.

38 Comments Add yours

  1. Siddhant says:
    July 9, 2017 at 22:14

    Very good poem.

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    1. sangbad says:
      July 9, 2017 at 22:34

      Thank you for stopping by…Keep visiting…

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  2. sakshi~the escapist says:
    June 29, 2017 at 17:33

    Good going my friend. Keep writing and you’ll be pro in hindi poetry in no time. Well done!

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    1. sangbad says:
      June 29, 2017 at 19:48

      May be…I’m learning Hindi & writing poem in it right now…

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      1. sakshi~the escapist says:
        June 29, 2017 at 20:46

        That’s great! All the best.

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        1. sangbad says:
          June 29, 2017 at 22:03

          Thanks…

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  3. Meenakshi Sethi says:
    June 28, 2017 at 23:25

    Good first attempt bro! I’m sure you can win hearts in hindi too! Do not stop here keep writing ! ☺

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    1. sangbad says:
      June 28, 2017 at 23:33

      ☺ will try to not to stop…

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