Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments

Barish main bheegi hawa chu gaya is shaam

Acha hi laga is thaka hua ankhonko, manko

Yaad aya kuch bhige hue yaaden achanak

Rokna chaha par pal kisike sunta nahi…

xx–

The rain drenched breeze passes me this evening

It feels good to the tired eye, soul

Few drenched memories crowd me suddenly

I want to stop them but bits never obey…

–xx–

Tried a Hindi poem first time here. Please comment and let me know your reviews.

38 responses to “Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments”

  1. Awesome…be it in Hindi or Bengali your writing is always beautiful πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ»

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    1. Banglae kothae likhlm…likhbo khub siggiri…

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      1. That chilly chkn ans Sourav Ganguly write-up had some bengali lines and words…tai bollamπŸ‘ŒπŸ»

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        1. Oh acha…otato ektukhani…English likhle bhalo porte lagchilona tai…by the way aj j fictionta post korechi kmn hoyche janio pore…When the Devil Sneeze…

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          1. Okay ami porechi ekbar…arekbar porchiπŸ‘

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  2. I personally want my poems to create a visual imagery & loads and loads of pity on myself when the subject matter is like the one you created in your poem and the ending words do not rhyme with each other.

    My version:

    Khidki se dekhta rehta hoon bheegi yaadon ko
    Goozarti hawa jab chhedti hai inn nam, bechain ankhon ko

    Yeh pal agar ruk bhi jaay humare kehne par
    To hum pichhe aur zamana aage badh jaata hai.

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    1. It was my first try at Hindi poem…I’ll slowly grab the language…by the way, nice poem…post it…

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      1. I just rephrased your lines and thots bro, I ain’t posting it. Keep writing awesome stuff.

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        1. Oh okay…thank you…will try to…

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  3. Wow first time I saw a blog in Hindi
    Written nicely πŸ˜ŠπŸ™‹πŸ™‹

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    1. Thank you…☺

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      1. Hindi ne likhte rehna
        😊

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        1. Koshish karunga…

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