The summer sun glistens on the water other day, but, today it’s cloudy. The MET office has predicted, according to Morning News, there’ll be a spell at late noon or early evening.
Joe look around. It’s being long he has been on a journey. He has been accompany with a trainee name Rob. Rob said something, but, he’s not in mood to hear. He sniff the air; it is moist and cold carrying promise of shower.
Rob now growl.
Joe look at him. He is sniffing the air now. Joe take a deep sniff.
Smell of rotten corpse he smell.Β
The other Joe’s Stories:
i. Poor Old Joe
100 Word Wednesday Week #25Β byΒ Bikurgurl

10 responses to “The Holiday (Micro Thriller)”
Oh my! A twist in the story! I had thought that there would be a row between Joe and Rob, but the discovery of the corpse? Gruesome! Do let us know if the story continues! Thank you for joining with our writing community – I always enjoy your unique story weaving and perspectives π
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Joe is my antagonist for the flash fiction…you can read his other stories following the link mentioned…in near future there will be few more…
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I saw the other stories and am happy to hear you are translating them for a ‘full reveal’!
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[β¦] The Holiday (Micro Thriller) β Thoughts of Words [β¦]
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ππ Joe series gulo ageo porechi…agerta aro bhalo legechilo…keep writing ππ»
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Indeed abrupt craving endπ
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βΊ thank you for reading…
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Interesting…It ends leaving us craving for more.
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βΊ tried to treat it like short story… an abrupt craving end…
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