You See the…[Micro/Flash Fiction]

The front wheel…no…the rear wheel…oh…cool down…you can do it…you’ve to…will they recognize me…am not the one they are expecting, but, his twin…doppelganger…yes it’s the right word…he may have gone away with her already…what’s that…her father and uncle are here…so, she’s missing…search…skim…you’ll never get your hand on them…yes, ask him…he’ll say he’s here…am here…but, it’s not him…it’s me…here comes the announcement…front wheel…no…how he does that…they’re looking at me…so what…it’s him…not me…


100-Word Wednesday Week#27

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Nicolas Picard


 

By Sangbad

A poet, an author, a reviewer--in one word I'm a literaturist (means one who is trying almost everything that Literature is made of). My books are available at Amazon. I'm a Bengali, born and raised in Kolkata, West Bengal.

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  2. Oh so cryptic! So did he take her? Did she run away with him? It’s all very mysterious. The way you wrote it seemed like a rap and I rapped it in my mind. I went back to re-read for fullness of clarity. I love the perspective and making me think — well done! Thank you so much for joining us again this week 🙂

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      1. As I like to do also — it allows the reader to fill in the spaces, which allows the reader to make the story their own and be more emotionally involved in the outcome. Well done!

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