Khoya [Hindi Poem #5]

Shaam kuch alaag si thi

Hawa mein ek madhosi thi

Anjaani dhundla sha.

Khamosian yaad ki bhi tha

Safed chand ki hawa mein chupa.

Dard ki dard, uske ahaten sab tha

Phir bhi akela mehsoos nahin hua.


If there is any mistake please point it out.

14 responses to “Khoya [Hindi Poem #5]”

  1. Reblogged this on YAADON KA SILSILA and commented:
    very nice

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    1. Thank you for this…never thought my poem in Hindi can be rebloged… it’s sort of honor

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  2. btw mera khud ka bhi blog hai ek
    munishbatra.wordpress.com
    do check it.

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  3. I THINK THERE ARE MANY TYPING MISTAKES.
    DO CHECK IT

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  4. Fantastic lines👏👏👏👏
    Few lines from my new poem :
    ना उम्मीद नहीं प्यार, था रिश्ता दोस्ती का 
    कुछ ऐसा हुआ इकरार कि, रूबरू होना मुश्किल हो गया !
    समझाया खुद को बहुत, जज्बात काबू ना हुए 
    होना था तुझसे दूर,पर दिल मजबूर हो गया !!

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    1. I can read translition…so can you rewrite it…

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