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  1. Nice and cute Haiku with an apt picture.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Not Haiku…Tanka…☺

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        1. Sangbad says:

          It’s okay…

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  2. Words truly roll in different way and fabulously written!!

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  3. This is stunning.
    Loved this Tanka.

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  4. Reena Saxena says:

    I like breaking the word ‘yellow’ in two lines. You may convert it into a freeform Tanka with all the words in one line.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Actually it is a sort of technique I use sometimes to keep the structure intact…in past had used it in Haiku…thanks for your suggestion…

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        1. Sangbad says:

          I have checked this…maybe I will post one…

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