Scribbling in Hindi

Just a set of scribbles in Hindi (Transliteration). If there’s mistake point it out. And let me know which one or which line you liked.

Ijazaat

raste alaag hona tumne mangi thi

bhulna bhi tumne chahi thi

maine manga tha ant, maut,

lekin wobhi ata nahi jitna bhi mangu

uska ijazaat tumne lay rakhi hai jo…

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Gaheraai

shaam dhaal chukhi hai

rehene dete kissa dardka ankahee

gham hum donoka pane day gaheraai

chal jake shote hai taaron mein

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Gubbare

gubbare udd raha hai shamki hawa main

jaise koi kissa hai ek ek aur dhund raha hai

ek haath likhne ke lie

ek zubaan bolne ke lie

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