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Hold Your Step Dear Traveler…–Michael Madhusudan Dutta

Clock (Metro Haiku)

dark blue sky silvery

breeze breathe cool summer night clock ticks

adding shades to now

Sangbad

#city, #Kolkata, #micropoetry, #night, #senryu, Haiku

9 responses to “Clock (Metro Haiku)”

Shreya Sharma

May 4, 2017 at 7:27 pm

I wish I could write with such beautiful rhythm.
I love your verses. ❤️❤️

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1. Sangbad
  
  May 4, 2017 at 7:30 pm
  
  😊 thanks Shreya…you write beautiful also…dont be 😯 but be 😃
  
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  1. Shreya Sharma
    
    May 5, 2017 at 1:58 pm
    
    Hehe hann 😊😊
    
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    1. Sangbad
      
      May 5, 2017 at 2:36 pm
      
      😀
      
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Sreeblogs

May 4, 2017 at 5:04 pm

one can actually paint the whole scene reading your poems…daruun

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1. Sangbad
  
  May 4, 2017 at 7:11 pm
  
  😊
  
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Peace Kathure

May 4, 2017 at 1:21 pm

Flighty and magical…love it:)

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1. Sangbad
  
  May 4, 2017 at 11:00 pm
  
  Thanks…my pleasure…
  
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Sheetal Bhardwaj

May 4, 2017 at 12:20 pm

Lovely. ❤

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