Dawn: A Love Poem

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[This is to all the blogger friends who are in love and who are happily married. Please let me know your thoughts after reading this.]

The dawn is like your kiss at morn–soft and solace

The breeze is like your breath–bated and serene

The silence is like your eye–deep and pacific

The morn that follows is like you–

After you left me, alone in bed–

Blue, pensive, maroon…

For Her

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27 Comments Add yours

  1. A delightful poem, Sangbad.

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thank you Robbie…

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  2. That really was very heart-warming as well as saddening towards the end. Well put together

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    1. Sangbad says:

      This is what a guy feel I think at morning…thank you for the comment

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  3. Beautiful expressions!

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  4. It used to felt in initial days of married life but now its like…ok thank you for giving me some moments of privacy with myself 😃

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    1. Sangbad says:

      😆 nothing to say…

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  5. Ritu says:

    Great sentiments conveyed in your verse 🙂

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    1. Sangbad says:

      Thanks Ritu Ma’am…

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