Thoughts of Words

Hold Your Step Dear Traveler…–Michael Madhusudan Dutta

Dagger & Cilice (Horror Haiku/Senryu)

–1–

hands shook hood moved breath

heavy young apprentice

slit young woman throat

–x–

–2–

fastening harder

blood stream down thigh novice scream

master smiled bowl fill

–x–

Daily Prompt: Apprentice

Sangbad

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2 responses to “Dagger & Cilice (Horror Haiku/Senryu)”

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    micketalbot

    Sangbad, they really are very good, however, not haiku, senryu yes, for they both refer to foibles. Modernist seem to have no regard for tradition. Not casting aspersions on you, but true haiku are about, (as you know), nature.

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    1. Sangbad Avatar
      Sangbad

      Yes…that’s why I use Haiku/Senryu…

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