Robe (Featured)

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National Poem Writing Month 2018 Day#27: Today,

following Lauren Hunterโ€™s practice of relying on tarot cards to generate ideas for poems, we challenge you toย pick a cardย (any card), and then to write a poem inspired either by the card or by the images or ideas that are associated with it.

My selection is Number 9 card of Hermit


 

every nightย 

ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  ย  my soul ache

to talk to someoneย  ย  ย to let the poison outย  ย  ย to burn the poems

and to warmย  ย  my handย  ย  in that fire

madness you can sayย 

as the idea standsย  ย  at the threshold

I show the lightย  ย  coming from itย  ย  to be forecastย  ย  on the wallย  ย  of my room

atonement

I feelย  ย  when the wordsย  ย  get arrested

in the pages

giving birth to a poemย  ย  just a poem, nothing else

looking insideย  ย  ย I find meย  ย  in a robeย  ย  holding the lantern

flame is the poem

poem that’s just arrangement of wordsย  ย  nothing else



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28 responses to “Robe (Featured)”

  1. Excellent! Thank you for your poem.

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  2. I enjoyed your poem very much. It captures the hermits essence. And congrats on being featured Sangbad! ๐Ÿ˜Š

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    1. Thank you Kat…and my pleasure you liked it…

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  3. Perfect format for a hesitant hermit — chopped speech with pauses/spaces between phrases — and the urgency of it all in bold — works wonders.

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    1. Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem…and sharing your thoughts…

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  4. Congrats on being featured, Sangbad ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks…but what about the poem…how was it

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      1. Good. I liked the fiery imagery.

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        1. Thanks Jane for letting me know your review…

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            1. Today I tried again a new form…hope you will like that too…

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            2. Iโ€™ll have a look.

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  5. Congrats Sangbad๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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    1. Thanks Smitha…am more than overwhelmed by this being featured

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      1. I’m happy to know somebody who has been๐Ÿ˜Š

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