Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments

Barish main bheegi hawa chu gaya is shaam

Acha hi laga is thaka hua ankhonko, manko

Yaad aya kuch bhige hue yaaden achanak

Rokna chaha par pal kisike sunta nahi…


The rain drenched breeze passes me this evening

It feels good to the tired eye, soul

Few drenched memories crowd me suddenly

I want to stop them but bits never obey…


Tried a Hindi poem first time here. Please comment and let me know your reviews.

38 responses to “Bhige Pal/Drenched Moments”

    1. Thank you for stopping by…Keep visiting…


  1. Good going my friend. Keep writing and you’ll be pro in hindi poetry in no time. Well done!


    1. May be…I’m learning Hindi & writing poem in it right now…

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      1. That’s great! All the best.


  2. Good first attempt bro! I’m sure you can win hearts in hindi too! Do not stop here keep writing ! ☺


    1. ☺ will try to not to stop…

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